new song, want feedback :)

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semidiablan

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Hey! I'm hoping I could get some feedback on my song. I guarantee it's at least worth a listen. Ignore the slight clipping at parts, I haven't gone back and done all the levels perfectly yet.

Anyway, I'd love both enjoyment feedback and technical feedback...thanks!
There are a few things that I feel like need tweaking, but I'd like some feedback to see what other people think first (since I've listened to the song about 1000 times).

:)
surreal electronic rock

untitled song
 
On headphones the vocal is too far to the left. I don't really listen to a lot of this kind of music, so... There are some cool sounds in there, but to me it lacks a groove, seems a bit disjointed. Drop in a pulsing bass line and a disco beat and you could have something
 
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