New song to review; "Memories"

[DiverDave8]

Hi all,

OK this is my first project on my Tascam and my first contribution to the board for review. Any constructive comments wud be greatly appreciated!

First, this is an "anniversary song" I wrote for my wife. It is our 25th and I got the lyrics from a set of poems I wrote before we got married. This song is really a "sleeper" so make sure you have your caffine! [:]^).

Also, I wasn't blessed w/that killer voice; take that for whatit'sworth.

Here it is and thanks!

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Downl....cfm?ID=992444

[Be Loveless]

I really enjoy the overall simplicity of it. I don't know if you intended it to be , but there's an endearing "quirky" quality to it that your mix suits. It might be fun to actually give it "worn out" tone to the overal mix, maybe like it's playing off an old worn record?