Very creative stuff. I really thought the tune was cool untill about the 2 minute mark. Needs a change,..I dunno,..something. I think the spoken vocs work but I would only do it once. After that I thought it was overdone. I didnt like the lyrics,..but thats purely my own view,..I'm not saying the lyrics suck or not well written,..but,..they just didnt do it for me.
I agree,..needs some low end. But i lo-fi'ed it so i could be wrong.
I think the lead parts end too sharply,..nothing right after to back it up. It just drops to nothing,..I'd put somethin' in those parts or make the leads longer.
cool tune overall I think.
Take 'er easy,..
Calwood