i really really like it, and i agree that it needs layering up. but i'm hearing a generally quite light backing. bits of percussion, maybe some extra guitar lines... access to any good female singers? that'd contrast really nicely. i like the guitar sound, though i'd consider going a bit lighter on the reverb? maybe.
Well I wish I had the equipment and recording knowledge to layer it up! I'm a broke college student, haha. One day I will have the tools and knowledge. Every day is a learning process for me on this subject, so I'll make it slowly but surely..