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    New song about angsty prophets

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    Homo Deprecatus - Isaiah's Lament

    I have a compulsion to write a song about it every time I find poetry in the Bible that rhymes in English. This is one of the more successful instances of this.

    Feedback is welcome.

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    Similarly to the other song I just commented on, I'd like to hear a little less of the wah/flangery rhythm git. Sounds like there is a cool something in there - organ? high bass part? I wanna hear more of it. Also, dropping the vol of the rhythm git would make the vox stand out better.

    Cool change up at 1:45.

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    out of curiosity, I have to ask. Do you play your guitar with a pick or with your fingers?

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    Mostly with a pick, but the lead part here was hammer-ons.

    The instruments on this one are vocals, (fake) drums, rhythem and lead guitars, and bass. I'm guessing the high part you're hearing is the lead, Andyhix?

    Thanks for the input.

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    Cool kind of a punk feel to this. Vocals could come up a tad. The "treacherous" phrase was perfect... Catchy - I'm still humming it...!

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    Very cool. I actually like the flangey guitars, they're unique. Really like the low key drums with the tambourine. I keep thinking I want the vocals louder but on a second listen I can understand ya, so I think they're probably about right. Really dig it man. I'd leave it alone personally, has that raw-punkish vibe that i dig.

    Take care man

    Gary

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    I got a "question mark" icon on top of the QT player icon. Anybody know what that signifies. I'll try download (if your site allows) and play in media.
    ac

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    Got it to play ok downloaded. Fun tune, maybe not supposed to be, but that's how it struck me. A real drummer would go a long way adding strength to this. You should put it up sans drums and see if you can get some takers.
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    Cool tune, dig the geetar sound. The vocals need to be a little louder and more focused. Some background harmonies might work too. I like the fact that you brought in a dueling voice at the end, nice touch.

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