New love song 2012, first ever song i wrote and sang :-)

I can't hear the singing that well through the mix, so I would suggest turning up the vocals a bit more. Otherwise it's not bad man, it's a good start! :)

Keep it up!
 
was the backing tracks a construction kit? they sound good for what the track needs, the mix sound fine as well


the vocals need to come up a bit, I was finding it hard to hear them too


great first effort
 
Thanks guys, will sort the vocals out, would pro logic 9 be better to use then garageband?

Depends on how much of the instrumentation is yours

If its just loops garageband should be fine, youd be better spending money on a mic, pre amp/interface, and some monitors...
 
& better off posting an audio file rather than a vid to get squished in utub compression/conversion.
 
The lyrics are difficult to understand but it does seem muddy. I think you just need to bring the vocal track up.
 
Just started using pro logic 9, seems a lot lot better then garageband, vocals sound clear, bit harder to use but its worth it, going to have fun with this lol, might rerecord my 1st song, what you guys think?
 
Back
Top