That opening riff and the percussion coming in sounds tops. Are you playing the percussion? Sounds like brushes on a snare and something else, maybe a tom or something. It's a very bouncy kind of thing you have going there. If you're gonna make a song out of it that includes bass, singing and all the trimmings, it'd be good to hear it again.
I reckon it's good...I like acoustic stuff, though it's an interesting little change to the electric tones.
Did you use loops at all? Tell me how you did all the percussion...
keep on truckin'