Never Again - Grunge Song

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jonlint

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Hi all,

Hadn't written anything for while, but the pause came to an end today. Wrote this song quite quickly - sometimes breaks are good to clear the mind. Feedback most welcome:

Never Again by Jonathan Linton 4 | Free Listening on SoundCloud

NEVER AGAIN
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

Use your stealth, find a victim
Cheat into their inner sanctum
For you to rise, others must fall
First through the slime, you must crawl

But I won’t be fooled
No, never again
Won’t be ridiculed
Never again

I put my trust in you
And you stabbed me in the back
No, no, never again
No! Never again

One day your time will come
Not every victim’s so dumb
Those who you’ve fooled, will turn against you
A slime creature hidden from view

But I won’t be fooled
No, never again
Won’t be ridiculed
Never again

I put my trust in you
And you stabbed me in the back
No, no, never again
No! Never again

SOLO

No!
I put my trust in you
And you stabbed me in the back
No, no, never again
No! Never again
 
I'd really like to hear it more dry. Everything is very washy. Nice performances and vocal. I'm getting an AIC Dirt vibe from the mix and tones. Nice work.
 
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