My tunes

[BurnBarfield]

http://www.recordingproject.com/bbs/viewtopic.php?t=3296 check them out, critique mixing, and songs..

 

[BurnBarfield]

bumppy

 

[Toki987]

That link is fast.... dang. I`ll be over there soon. I`ll give em a good listen.

 

[BurnBarfield]

well, what do you think? i need criticism... and drum tracks. and food.. hahaha. Well criticism is really helpful

 

[Toki987]

Lot of energy in the first tune. Tight playing to be solo that long and changin up stuff, and the guitar sound aint bad at all and pretty good arrangement. That riff inside that hinge chord you use gets a little crowded and almost enharmonic but it works. I couldnt hear bass except on the 2nd tune. You need a machine or a drummer big time. I'm sure it would be much more fun. The 2nd tune sounded like you got tired on it It could use a bit of upper mids.

 

[BurnBarfield]

Yeah, the first tune I really do like, and at a point in the lead break it does get a bit crowded. But I didn't realize the bass was too low? Do you really think? hah.. The second tune, middle of the night, improv on the whole thing. hahah