Hey, this is okay!
I do like this kinda (weird) tracks, being a fan of Pink Floyd, Zappa, Tool etc.
the drum intro? hmm, not so interessting.
the piano break (Great! which piano do you want me to break, lol)
is awsome, I love this kinda thingies
Recording wise: Very transparant, great use of the FRQ spectrum, not to much comressed so great dynamics but also power.
I love the dark voice, the octaver in the middle is a cool thing, keeps you appreciate the lower voice even more!