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    my fourth post in the clinic

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    i posted this one in songwriting before also, but i thought id give it a go here as well.

    http://www.drumfish.com/albums/drumf...20-%20mask.mp3

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    Mixmkr is going to be mad at me! But I think it sounds great. How did you record the drums? They sound very big. I could have used a little more bass guitar. The mix is perhaps a bit bright. Great performance. I like it! I would have liked a more melodic guitar solo. Still, very very good!!
    [url=http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=3232&alid=-1]Here are some of my tunes. Good for a laugh![/url]

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    fourth??


    er....??


    Did I miss the third one??


    I'll check this oat when I get home.


    WATYF


    P.S. Syd... I used to live in Lockport. Just north of 159th, right next to the Forest Preserve. What area are you in?

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    Originally posted by WATYF
    fourth??

    er....??

    Did I miss the third one??

    I'll check this oat when I get home.

    WATYF

    P.S. Syd... I used to live in Lockport. Just north of 159th, right next to the Forest Preserve. What area are you in?

    the third one was a thread (now on page 2 of the forum) called "which version should I go with?" where i had a tune we recently worked out as well as a vocal outtake that was a bit goofy but funny.

    i live in warrenton virginia.. the gateway to the blueridge mountains!

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    Originally posted by WATYF
    P.S. Syd... I used to live in Lockport. Just north of 159th, right next to the Forest Preserve. What area are you in?
    Wow! Small world. I live just south of 159th, in the old part of town kitty korner from the old east high school. I'm trying to place where you were.
    [url=http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=3232&alid=-1]Here are some of my tunes. Good for a laugh![/url]

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    well hell!!!

    next tuesday we should have a hr-bbs event at my singer/songwriter open stage at fantastico's in warrenton. it would freaking rock to hang out with y'all in person AND get a chance to hear ya play!

    here's where it is:
    http://www.mapquest.com/maps/map.adp...submit=Get+Map

    and here is their number:
    540-349-2575

    i run it from 9p to 1a.

    hope to see you virginians there!

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    didn't care for the intro. once the song kicks in, i really like the drums! you've got a nice voice. this has a very live feel to it. i like it.

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    that intro was intresting.. all over the place. demented.

    man those toms are out there right when it kicks in. very nice but it pulls me out of the vocal a little. maybe duck them back volume wise or pull them more to center when the vocal comes in.

    Is this an acoustic bass? I want to hear it more... The low end needs work in general. especially the kick. just sounds wrong to me. all i hear is like 10k and no low end at all.

    The guitars really work for me, nice effect
    -jhe

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    I love this mix Alex. Sounds really nice and big. Drums sound excellent.


    Twist

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    I really like this tune.

    The intro is cool but goes on a bit too long.

    The tom hits seem a bit hot and I don't dig the wide panning.

    The bass guit. level is a bit hot a first, then drops way down. Comes back then goes away again. Needs to me more consistant.

    Turn that guitar solo up a bit.


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