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    My first try

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    This is my first go at a whole song written and recorded by myself. I want your honest opinions... but take it easy on the newb!!!!! BTW the drums are sampled.

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/connectionmusic.htm

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    "Song not cleared yet" - I'll try again later...

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    Sorry about that... I didn't think there would be a delay.

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    OK, it's up now!

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    The song rocked! I'll leave the mixing advise to some of the experts in here. I think there's some harshness on the vocals that can probably be addressed. You have them hot in the mix and probably by design and that in itself sounds good. However, you may want to experiment with the eq on them. The other thing I think is the drums probably werent hitting hard enough in relation to the rest of the music either. Good track though

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    Ray J - thanks for the positive words man!!!! After listening a few more times I've noticed a "glitch" or two in the choruses. Must have been a problem with the conversion to MP3, cause it's not in the original .wav file. I think I'll reconvert it and upload it again. I know what you are saying about the vocals, I've noticed the harshness also. I struggle with vocals so if anyone has any suggestions I would greatly appreciate it.

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