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    hey all, this is the first song that my group, Certain Disposition, has recorded. i'd love it if anyone could give it a listen and make suggestions. the title of the song is "Thurnau" and here's the link.

    www.soundclick.com/bands/3/certaindisposition_music.htm

    thanks!!
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    bad link
    audio?
    seriously, give me negative rep.

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    i'll try again, sorry

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    hopefully this fixed the link

    Here's the link to my first song "thurnau"

    let me know if this doesn't work. hehehe and if it doesn't, how do i get it to work.

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    Hi

    That's pretty good. I like the vocals and the acoustic guitars. The tone of the electric quitar needs some work. Also, I would take a slightly higher pitch for the snare but maybe that's my personal preference. Nice work.

    /Jack Real

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    thanks!! i appreciate the advice and i'll give it a shot. i always try everyone's advice. thanks once again.
    [URL=http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/certaindisposition_music.htm]Certain Disposition's music - Check Us Out!!! :)[/URL]

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    for me, the acu in the L is kinda thin and over compressed.

    maby cut some (not much)mids out of the electric?
    and maby turn it down.

    de-ess the vox a little. just a few problems in the second verse.

    have fun!
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    for me, the acu in the L is kinda thin and over compressed.
    huh, what do u mean the "acu in the L"... ??? i've never heard of those abreviations.
    [URL=http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/certaindisposition_music.htm]Certain Disposition's music - Check Us Out!!! :)[/URL]

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    acoustic guitar in the left hand speaker? just a guess

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    Quote Originally Posted by corban
    acoustic guitar in the left hand speaker? just a guess

    duh, absolutely. my bad, i guess i was having a brain fart. i agree with giraffe, they do sound a bit thin, any suggestions to "fatten" 'em up?
    [URL=http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/certaindisposition_music.htm]Certain Disposition's music - Check Us Out!!! :)[/URL]

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