For my Daughter

0-1:00 is a bit long for an intro. That also applies to the section between the verses. Good tone/blending/feel on the vocals - I thought they could be louder. Nice smooth sound, but I would suggest more vocals or leads to fill it up a bit. I think you have something great I'd just like some more to it...

Also, you picked a great name for your daughter...it's nice that you get inspiration from her.

:):D:):D
 
its not really a 1:00 intro, its actually a verse when the kick and snare comes in and the chorus is where the vocals set in.
 
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