Pro's
1. aurally interesting
2. good composition
3. Like the beginning sound effect instrument, gives it an eerie feel. What is it? I like it. It should dip down a bit when the vocals come in though.
4. Snare sounds nice
Con's
1. HHat sounds a little bright
2. Kick needs some more low end, attack is ok
3. The vocals sound dry and distorted. Try and see what it would sound like if you emulated the vocal style from the Sapranos theme. Keep the harmonies and everything. It's the eq or something. It just sounds like you are using a distortion effect. "No sir......I don't like it......"
4. That guitar should be more peripheral, it seems to stick out in front of the mix too much
5. Low end is a bit muddy
Next!! Step right up.....get your abuse here......