I think that master is bit too scooped and thin - almost harshly bright, and the snare almost disappears. But I think I understand the choices.
Overall, the original mix does lack air. My taste is to also have solid presence sub 100hz. This will naturally scoop the sound a bit, but if the boosts are somewhat surgical, it should balance things out. The upper and lower mid range of the mix are pretty well good to go I think, minus some weird build-up around 700hz.