Well, I think the tune has lots of promise. I like the countryish vibe and the vocals are strong. I'm assuming that this is a demo which is going to be re-recorded, cause it's pretty sloppy at the moment. The bass and piano especially seem to be poorly EQ'd and muddy. The vocals have a ton of reverb on them, (which I actually like), but again they are muddied by too much mid-range.
The chorus/break that happens 1/2 way through is interesting. The first time I listened I didn't like it - too discordant without giving enough of a harmonic "lift". But it did sort of grow on me and I like the way it resolves into the harmonic solo. Not sure what to suggest for that part.
Definitely worth polishing up...
- JM