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    Hello All,
    I'm working on this new tune and before I finish the vocals and lead inst. I would like 2 hear any thoughts you may have...anything at all that will help me make this mix better.

    http://www.mediagraffiti.com/media/Mix2.mp3

    Thankx for your time
    Garger

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    Cool

    Pretty clean for this style of music. I thought the vocals sounded over-processed and somewhat sibilant.
    I couldn't hear a bass at all.
    Likewise the low end on the drums. For that keyboard line I'd like a patch that was a little more distinct.
    Winamp's freq. analyzer is showing an abundance of highs and a very distinctly rolled-off low end.

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    Thankx!

    drstawl,

    I tried to get the vocals to punch through abit, your right, it brought out the sibilance.
    Also the with the bass, I had some very uruly flabby notes taking up to much space, I think I pressed 'um to hard.

    After working on the tune for a couple of days, I lose focus, hence the post.
    Thankx for a very solid and clear observation...brought me back down to earth.

    Have a cool weekend!

    Garger

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    Nice job. The bottom end is definitely lacking a bit. As far as arrangement goes I would cut your intro in half or add another guitar over it (or instrument of choice). Same thing with your bridge. A bit repetitious but i think another git on top of it would fill it out nice. Overall good song! Just some constuctive criticism. (am I even allowed to talk about the arrangement of a song in this forum? Hope so!) Keep up the good work, Garger.

    Brett

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    Bantos,
    Thankx for the reply...as far as arrangement goes, once the lead vocals and lead inst. are in I think it might have a different flavour and round it off abit.

    Garger

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    Yep! I'm an idiot. Sorry, didn't read your post clearly. My bad!(a little anxious too listen)

    Brett

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