Input on this mix...please?
- Thread starter Garger
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drstawl
Banned
Pretty clean for this style of music. I thought the vocals sounded over-processed and somewhat sibilant.
I couldn't hear a bass at all.
Likewise the low end on the drums. For that keyboard line I'd like a patch that was a little more distinct.
Winamp's freq. analyzer is showing an abundance of highs and a very distinctly rolled-off low end.
I couldn't hear a bass at all.
Likewise the low end on the drums. For that keyboard line I'd like a patch that was a little more distinct.
Winamp's freq. analyzer is showing an abundance of highs and a very distinctly rolled-off low end.
Thankx!
drstawl,
I tried to get the vocals to punch through abit, your right, it brought out the sibilance.
Also the with the bass, I had some very uruly flabby notes taking up to much space, I think I pressed 'um to hard.
After working on the tune for a couple of days, I lose focus, hence the post.
Thankx for a very solid and clear observation...brought me back down to earth.
Have a cool weekend!
Garger
drstawl,
I tried to get the vocals to punch through abit, your right, it brought out the sibilance.
Also the with the bass, I had some very uruly flabby notes taking up to much space, I think I pressed 'um to hard.
After working on the tune for a couple of days, I lose focus, hence the post.
Thankx for a very solid and clear observation...brought me back down to earth.
Have a cool weekend!
Garger
Nice job. The bottom end is definitely lacking a bit. As far as arrangement goes I would cut your intro in half or add another guitar over it (or instrument of choice). Same thing with your bridge. A bit repetitious but i think another git on top of it would fill it out nice. Overall good song! Just some constuctive criticism. (am I even allowed to talk about the arrangement of a song in this forum? Hope so!) Keep up the good work, Garger.
Brett
Brett