Inner Circle - Cross between King's X/Soundgarden/AIC

[jonlint]

Hi all,

Wrote this song last weekend. My singing was off - just wasn't on par with my normal performance. Will re-record vocals later.

Feedback on the song welcome:

Inner Circle by Jonathan Linton 4 | Free Listening on SoundCloud

INNER CIRCLE
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

Shut out of the middle
In the fringes, all alone
Luck only dribbles
Emptiness is all I’ve known
Curse I own….

Hid by shadows
Yes it’s me
I’m the one
You never see
Ghost of who I want to be

I wanna be
In the inner circle
To fill the hole that’s deep within
Always outside, looking in
The inner circle

Must be real special
In the circle center
Labelled as a rebel
Got them all real fooled within
Circle spin…

Obscurity
Yes that’s me
Doomed to be
Nobody
Ghost of who I want to be

I wanna be
In the inner circle
To fill the hole that’s deep within
Always outside, looking in
The inner circle

SOLO

I wanna be
In the inner circle
To fill the hole that’s deep within
Always outside, looking in
The inner circle
I wanna be
In the inner circle
To fill the hole that’s deep within
Always outside, looking in
The inner circle

 

[ajsajs]

I like. Good grunge guitar sound, clean and distorted. I like the chorus harmonizing! Vocals are not bad but not the best ever

One general remark is the arch of the song is very... linear. No highs/lows in terms of pace/intensity.

 

[Bulls Hit]

Sounds just like Dam that River, although a different tempo. Great grungy guitars