By the description of how you framed the song, you all ready know that there are some mix and performance issues with this piece so, there's not a lot of point dwelling on that.
I actually liked the song and was impressed with what you were to trying to do with it.
It's no easy feat to jump from a John Lennonesque piano ballad to a cracker rap piece and back again several times with Zappa style vocal harmonies in the rap section.
Yo' Smellyphant, niether will I get into the rec'ding issues, but this
song got a whole lotta' potential and if you hook this up rite, this joint will be a pleasure to flow with!
Very interesting concepts and the execution is nice considering that it's obvious you were throwing this down fast and dirty........it's really very cool. You could do a lot with just a good EQing and mixdown of these tracks.
Very Zappa with a twinge of Beatles and a band I'm the only person who ever heard of called Colours.
Hey elephant,
..yeah, really cool concept. ...so is it all good or not? I especially like the harmonies you chose for the "everything sucks" part. The musical section (ieiano) sounds a bit like it has a blanket thrown over it, but the intent is nice.
Nice writin here man g