This is your first recording? Okay, you have a gift. LOL...use it for good and not evil.
I think, overall...it's a truly excellent mix music-wise. I keep thinking I'm hearing the hat on both sides, which is a little weird, but maybe it's a tambourine on the left? That's a total nit-pick, by the way. I'm hearing what sounds to me like a choir of about 20, so I think it sounds great. Some serious time had to go into this.
Okay, her vocal. It's just too loud, in my honest opinion. It's a great voice, and I hardly EVER tell somebody to turn a vocal down, but the way it's sitting right not, it's TOO upfront and it's abrasive, particularly at high volumes, so it's not doing her the justice it deserves. WOW... I bet she DOES shred a condenser. If you've already cut mids out of that vocal, I'd hate to make her mad enough to scream at me!
She barely even NEEDS a mic, LOL.
I'm hearing some "plosives" too (e.g., "stand up and
Praise him @2:52)...Those can be fixed usually by rolling off some lows on the vocal, but with this vocal, I'd ONLY do that on the "P's," if at all, because it's gonna' accentuate the mids in her voice even more.
Anyway, after all that rambling, my opinion is that you should try cutting the level on her vocal at least 3db before you start undertaking any surgical EQ magic...It sounds like you captured a beautiful voice, and I bet it'll sit nicely in this mix...or any other, for that matter.