"I Hope She Knows" - Please critique

jimmiebananas

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This is a tune I wrote the lyrics for and couldn't get the guitar down until it finally just happened.

This was recorded at the very end of a long session of experimentation so it's about the 3rd take at this version of the song and a rough draft at this point.

It was done with one mic in one take.

You can find it here:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5315704&q=hi

All critiques/tips/advice about recording/lyrics/etc. are more than welcome

Thanks in advance.
 
I could hear this on a movie soundtrack...you've got a really good tune here.

Vocal delivery and tone are excellent, maybe just a bit loud in the mix though.

I like the "one mike, one take" feel of this. It gives it sort of a late 60's/70's quality that sounds really familiar but I can't quite put my finger on.

Good job!!

Brad
 
i love this, sounds really good. as i listen to your voice i cant help to think of john mayer, i bet you could do a very good cover of one of his songs.
 
If you could run a de esser over a couple of parts this'd be a keeper as well as a draft.
 
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