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    "I Hope She Knows" - Please critique

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    This is a tune I wrote the lyrics for and couldn't get the guitar down until it finally just happened.

    This was recorded at the very end of a long session of experimentation so it's about the 3rd take at this version of the song and a rough draft at this point.

    It was done with one mic in one take.

    You can find it here:
    http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=5315704&q=hi

    All critiques/tips/advice about recording/lyrics/etc. are more than welcome

    Thanks in advance.

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    I could hear this on a movie soundtrack...you've got a really good tune here.

    Vocal delivery and tone are excellent, maybe just a bit loud in the mix though.

    I like the "one mike, one take" feel of this. It gives it sort of a late 60's/70's quality that sounds really familiar but I can't quite put my finger on.

    Good job!!

    Brad

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    sounds good to me. perhaps a guitar break before the last chorus would help.

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    i love this, sounds really good. as i listen to your voice i cant help to think of john mayer, i bet you could do a very good cover of one of his songs.
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    If you could run a de esser over a couple of parts this'd be a keeper as well as a draft.

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