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    I didn't Cry Last Night

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    I am so sorry Guys that I had posted the wrong audio link below. But please check the above link (the right link). and listen to the song.



    I am kindly asking for some feedback on my song. (lyric and melody).




    I Didn't Cry Last Night
    ©2018 Irwin Abrigo
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    (Verse one)
    I was the fool you, broke all the rules, played games that lovers do
    Never caring about my feelings
    Many of nights alone, I sat at home, and I cried, I cried
    asking myself why, don't you, understand

    I gave you my heart, all that I ask, of you
    Is to give me, in return, your heart too
    But last night I told myself I am not crying anymore, When you walked out that door
    I stood up strong Cause I realized, somehow I got to survive
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    (Chorus)
    And I didn't cry last night for the first time
    I didn't cry last night

    (Verse Two)
    Knowing its wrong, still you went alone, broke each and every vow
    I was thinking about our marriage
    I do believe in love, but for somehow, in my vain, it pains
    Living through the years, like this, isn't fair

    I gave to you my all, all that I ask of you
    Is to give me, in return, your all too
    Last night I told myself I couldn't take it anymore, Midnight and you're not home
    I'd cried many nights before, a river just like the Nile

    (Chorus)

    All that youíve put me through have been hurting, not hurting anymore
    Iíve made it through the storm, now there is a claim
    Iím not crying for the first time, Iím not crying
    For the first time last night, I didnít cry

    For the first, I didnít cry
    Last night
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    Is that FX behind the vocal triggered by the vocal, or is someone riding a synth along with the vocal?

    I like the lyrics and the vocal, the mix sounded ok to me, but the FX wasn't melodic enough to make it pleasant for me to listen to.
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    I keep listening to your mixes, but honestly I do not get them.

    Can you tell me some of the influences that you're trying to emulate?

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    I cannot tell what key this is in. The vocal is in a different key than the music, which I don't think follows a melodic pattern anyhow. Where did you get this vocal from?
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    I am so sorry Guys that I had posted the wrong audio link below. But please check the above link (the right link). and listen to the song.

    Irwin

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    It's less disjointed I suppose, but I still don't "get it."

    What kind of sound are you going for here? Who are your influences?

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    Quote Originally Posted by VomitHatSteve View Post
    It's less disjointed I suppose, but I still don't "get it."

    What kind of sound are you going for here? Who are your influences?
    Hi VomitHatSteve, I really don't know, are you suggesting I work with a music producer?
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    I'm trying to understand what sound you're trying to get.
    Your songs consistently have a kind of cheap midi feel to them. They almost sound like a demo on an old 90s keyboard.
    Is that an intentional effect, or are you just having trouble achieving "realistic" sounds in your recordings?

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    Quote Originally Posted by VomitHatSteve View Post
    I'm trying to understand what sound you're trying to get.
    Your songs consistently have a kind of cheap midi feel to them. They almost sound like a demo on an old 90s keyboard.
    Is that an intentional effect, or are you just having trouble achieving "realistic" sounds in your recordings?
    I am using FL Studio (the demo version) to produce my tracks. I just lay down my ideas with those instrument that are available for me to choose from. But I am interesting if to be edcationed,

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    Quote Originally Posted by Irwin abrigo View Post
    But I am interesting if to be edcationed,
    I’m asking honestly here now: Is English not your first language? It’s completely fine if it’s not. It’s just that, we’re asking you questions, and your answers to these questions are not making sense.

    What music do you like?

    Who is your favorite musician?

    Do you have a favorite band?

    What’s your favorite genre?
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