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but is the quality good enough?
drstawl
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I loved that tune! Thank You! However:
Here is what I found wrong with it.
It's just dying for some melodic addition
as a development in the middle/end.
It's yearning for a vocal track. I kept wondering when that would start.
The timing got sloppy toward the end, and I'm not talking about the slowdown of the tempo that seemed to be part of the tune.
Amp noise showed up at the end that wasn't present at the beginning of the tune.
Otherwise; great job.
[This message has been edited by drstawl (edited 08-04-1999).]
Here is what I found wrong with it.
It's just dying for some melodic addition
as a development in the middle/end.
It's yearning for a vocal track. I kept wondering when that would start.
The timing got sloppy toward the end, and I'm not talking about the slowdown of the tempo that seemed to be part of the tune.
Amp noise showed up at the end that wasn't present at the beginning of the tune.
Otherwise; great job.
[This message has been edited by drstawl (edited 08-04-1999).]
Dragon, in regards to your reply, i have posted the song elswehere: http://members.xoom.com/btbrecords/changes.zip
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