Holy Swahili Goats

My kinda stuff!! Love the lyrics....dig that crazy beat...cool panning on my phones. Love this type of cool vocal delivery, perfect for this...very creative.Nice job man! I might nick this song title for my bands name for our next gig :p!
 
Thanks man. If I recall, you are the one who like my other song peas in a pod. I saw that both were on your soundclick station. I am glad you liked it.
 
Propman,
remember the international time zone have an influence on responses as does the large number of one/first timers who dropped in with albums full.
I really like this except for the sibilance you should try a de esser before the reverb.
The bass is a bit relentless so the change was really useful in breaking that up a little.
That last false rhyme was a bit of a clunker too.
Overall though a good piece of silly verse fun.
 
The reason I dudded myself so soon is because I was a bit dissapointed with this effort. I just wrote it more or less to see if I could. There is a reason the bass is so heavy, but it is more or less an inside joke. And another thing, I don't understand what false rhyme you are talking about.
 
You rhyme goats & boats and force slopes to rhyme as well. It works ok through the repeats but as it's the last word it hangs a little & reinforces that it's a false rhyme (doesn't really rhyme but is distorted so that it will).
I really like the texture of the song & the whole thing generally as previously stated.
 
it's cool. i the delayed sss sounds are cool. why bring out a de esser? could you write out the lyrics? i think everyone should write out their lyrics now that i think of it. it's a fun song, but the vocals are too present it kinda overwhelms things and music behind the vocals gets easily ignored. but its a wordy so song maybe the vocals should be in the forefront of things... i don't know it's all opinion.
 
Lots of fun!...less my kind of thing than some of your other efforts, but still well done. Still trying to catch up with the lyrics after a few listens...but I really like what I hear.:)

Mix sounds great. No advice here...sorry.
 
heatmiser said:
Lots of fun!...less my kind of thing than some of your other efforts, but still well done. Still trying to catch up with the lyrics after a few listens...but I really like what I hear.:)

Mix sounds great. No advice here...sorry.
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I wouldn't try to hard to catch up with the lyrics. They don't mean anything at all. lol.
 
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