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    Hip-hop: Gimme A Break!

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    First off, this beat is not produced by me. It was just me and two other chicks spittin on it. Please leave any feedbacks or critics:

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/fl...tionsmusic.htm

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    Re: Hip-hop: Gimme A Break!

    Originally posted by flame
    First off, this beat is not produced by me. It was just me and two other chicks spittin on it. Please leave any feedbacks or critics:

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/fl...tionsmusic.htm
    lol ... I feel ya! I need a break too! :-)

    Aye ... I think you should bring the volume up on the chorus so that it's "stronger".

    Oh, and what kind of mic are you using? I can understand you, but the vocals sound a little muffled.

    Keep at it!

    W-I-Z

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    Re: Re: Hip-hop: Gimme A Break!

    Originally posted by W-I-Z
    lol ... I feel ya! I need a break too! :-)

    Aye ... I think you should bring the volume up on the chorus so that it's "stronger".

    Oh, and what kind of mic are you using? I can understand you, but the vocals sound a little muffled.

    Keep at it!

    W-I-Z
    which verse you can't understand?

    and i can't turn the volume up on the hook, cuz that aint my beat.

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    Re: Re: Re: Hip-hop: Gimme A Break!

    Originally posted by flame
    which verse you can't understand?

    and i can't turn the volume up on the hook, cuz that aint my beat.
    I can understand all of them just fine .... they just sound a little muffled ... that's all.

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    Re: Re: Re: Re: Hip-hop: Gimme A Break!

    Originally posted by W-I-Z
    I can understand all of them just fine .... they just sound a little muffled ... that's all.

    yeah bad recording mic i guess

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    CHANGE OF LINK

    I just changed my band name, so the link has been changed too, click this link instead of the one above:

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/gr...tionsmusic.htm

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    real tight work..just tell whoever recorded it to bring the vocals up and it will be a done deal..


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    I'm the one who mixed it down. Bring the vocals up for the verses or the hook?

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    lol, a flip on the gimme a break theme??? cool


    the first lady sounds like Left Eye a bit, good flow, good verse....im feelin that


    second got more of a dirty south cadence....she got flow too....she rippin ...she got a bit more gangsta in her voice too. another good verse.


    third, she really got a different sound...i like it though, distinctive, not flexing her flow as much as the previous two emcees, but a good contrast....her lyrics are nice


    i enjoyed it, do your thing ladies...good to hear yall grinding

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    Need to work on everything across the board. Vocals are too hot and muffled...beat is thin, lacking in percussion...

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