Here's another one done on my DAW

[Xeries]

A rudimentary mastering at best. Still, see what you think. Thanks

http://www.songramp.com/mod/mps/view...?trackid=53400

[Xeries]

Bump. Tell me what is wrong with this if you can.

[Rokket]

The acoustic is a bit thin sounding, and it sounds like you DI'd it. Not bad, it fits the song, but it's noticeable.

Nice singing. I wish I could sing like that. I can't write lyrics like this either.

Are the drums programmed?

[Xeries]

The acoustic is a bit thin sounding, and it sounds like you DI'd it. Not bad, it fits the song, but it's noticeable.

Nice singing. I wish I could sing like that. I can't write lyrics like this either.

Are the drums programmed?

The drums are real. The acoustic might have been DI'd. I didn't do the recording or the mixing, just a little master tweaking and eqing to fish for sounds that were buried.

[joeym]

Great song as usual, Wig!
...and it's even got distorted guitars, Yeah
Voice is fantastic and it's a great tune. Really dig the harmonies.Only nit for me would be the drums,thgey sound a bit boxy and they could be a bit more spectacular. But that's just me....
Well done!
Cheers
Joe