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    Here's a song that me and my sister did. I produced, arranged, and wrote the song and she the one who laid down the vocals. Tell me HONESTLY what ya'll think?

    http://www.nowhereradio.com/songfayall/singles

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    Very weird. Interesting for a while. Get's repetitive - the chorus isn't distinctive enough from the verse. Needs something to break up the song.

    The vocals have a cool sound. But they're getting covered up by the instruments. All the effects on them I think are washing them out a bit too.

    I'm hearing some pops and can't figure out if they're part of the song or not (as an example take a listen at 1:38). As I said, they could be part of the percussion.

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    Rustyfingers, lol..yeah itís ok. I can handle it. Tell me honestly. Thatís what critics are for.
    TripleM, thanks for the advice. Iíll correct those mistakes next time we record.

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    genuwine - great vocal mix during most of it - what equipment did you use?

    -muzakal

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    I used the Mr-8 fostex recorder and V63-m mic. To make the beats, I used fruityloops

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    V63 straight into the MR8? Wow.

    Vocals - panned left and right for the "wide" feel?

    Can't say the vocalist is the best, but your production skill will definitely get you places. I'd look for new talent, and even experiment with other artist's songs in your free time to practice around a bit.

    -Muzakal

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    yep...vocals panned left, right and center, and v63m straight into the Mr-8

    i guess i should find a new singer to sing my songs.
    Last edited by Ginuwine; 03-12-2003 at 08:39.

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