Have A Listen!!

[squicklid]

My greatest tune yet (wait, its my only tune)

Its called "Don't You", and its here.

Im prepared for any kind of feedback. If it sucks, tell me.

edit: aww... it didn't change the title!

 

[chrisjorge]

Kind of a Chris Rea vox style. Pretty sparse instrumentation at this point. Going to add bass, drums / percussion / keys?

Watch the flat vocal in some parts. Also, I would try to come up with a harmony vocal way earlier to fill it out. Also during the solo (example at 4:20) the electric guitar is not in tune with the acoustic.

Keep building. You have a good start. I like the acoustic quality. Pretty smooth.

 

[squicklid]

im not going to add those things because I dont have them. and i dont want to use drum machine/midi. I know that adding them would be much better, but I can't at this point. But thanks for the input.