Hello there, the instruments levels are way off, voice sounds too hot, i didn't like the drums, there are a couple of mistakes, i think they are not well recorded, i mean with proper mics, anyway everything is there, but are also to low. I recommend use electronic drums if you can't record them properly. I barely can hear the bass, is there right?. Is that the sound you want for the guitars? I'm sure you can do better, a little eq on them, and also, try to match the harmonies, the guitars are not hitting together the notes.
Ok, is not everything bad for me, i like the vocals and the rhythm, not bad at all, seems like a driving song, and the most important thing is that i enjoyed the song, not my coup of tea, but i can hear it completely.
My advice, read some manuals about equalization, compression, limiting, etc. And take a look on Addictive Drums or Superior Drummer on youtube. All this will take your song to the next level.
Regards.
