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    Hello,

    This song, Summer without You, is the yin to Carrie Underwood's and the Dixie Chick's Yang, cause for every cheatin' boyfriend husband or wife-beating Earl out there, there's a premadonna high school girl that messes with guys heads.

    THis is a collaborative effort at Kompoz. We're happy how it turned out and would love some feedback. We're planning on adding a bit more mastering compression, so you may have to turn your volume up.

    Lyrics are attached , and link is below (mp3 is too large). Thanks for listening.

    bergen

    Summer without you - Summer without You Lyrics - Kompoz.com

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    Good tune, clean, good harmonies. The lead guitar is okay level-wise but I keep straining to hear the rest of the backing tracks. Maybe too much compression. I'll wait to see if anyone else thinks so. Again good tune...!

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    Sounds great, real good song, sounds good all around, I've never seen that site, (kompose) nice layout to it. I like a touch more Kick drum in a song like this, but thats real picky. Great Job!

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    Thank you for your feedback and compliments. I'd appreciate any other feedback anyone else has to offer.

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    Sounded decent. Good balance of instruments

    I didn't care too much for the distorted guitar sound. It was a little thin and mushy. The lead sound was OK.

    Little pop at 1:42. Elsewhere too (e.g., 1:54). Might come from the lead vocal track. Lead vocals sound compressed really hard. They're also way out in front of the the instruments.

    Snare was kind of wimpy.

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    I appreciate the critique.

    Any final comments?

    Thanks,

    Brian

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