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    First Clinic Post.

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    this is my first clinic post. after being here for quite a while

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/willnealymusic.htm

    top song titled "When I Cry"
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    Got a little bit of vocal problems on the P's and B's in the song. For me, that's a show stopper, look at "give up" at 0:08 for an example.

    Are the bass and guitar in tune? When the bass came in the tune sounded a bit off.

    Maybe a bit of percussion would spice things up.

    I like the flute, that's cool.

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    Get a popper stopper. It's good
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    Cool song, liked the effects on the vocals.

    You can make a 'popper stopper' that works better than the one in the picture on your soundclick page out of a coathanger and a nylon stocking.

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    unfortunatly at this moment i don't have a bass so that is a octave pedaled guitar. My next purpose is a popper stopper.

    the one on the picture page is not what i was using.. im using one of those thick pop screens for mics w/ a pencil in the middle of it.

    I'll try some percussion out on this.

    thanks for the idea.
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    Not necessarily my style of track, but I appreciate music... Lyrically, I like it... good stuff, but you definitely need a popper stopper. Or you need to edit out those p's and b's in your DAW.

    Overall, a good listen.

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    any comments other than the popper stopper on the actual recording/mix?
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