A Axis oompa loompa Feb 21, 2004 #1 this is my first clinic post. after being here for quite a while http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/willnealymusic.htm top song titled "When I Cry"
this is my first clinic post. after being here for quite a while http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/willnealymusic.htm top song titled "When I Cry"
L lynx New member Feb 22, 2004 #2 Got a little bit of vocal problems on the P's and B's in the song. For me, that's a show stopper, look at "give up" at 0:08 for an example. Are the bass and guitar in tune? When the bass came in the tune sounded a bit off. Maybe a bit of percussion would spice things up. I like the flute, that's cool.
Got a little bit of vocal problems on the P's and B's in the song. For me, that's a show stopper, look at "give up" at 0:08 for an example. Are the bass and guitar in tune? When the bass came in the tune sounded a bit off. Maybe a bit of percussion would spice things up. I like the flute, that's cool.
DigitalSmigital A slice of analog pie? Feb 22, 2004 #4 Cool song, liked the effects on the vocals. You can make a 'popper stopper' that works better than the one in the picture on your soundclick page out of a coathanger and a nylon stocking.
Cool song, liked the effects on the vocals. You can make a 'popper stopper' that works better than the one in the picture on your soundclick page out of a coathanger and a nylon stocking.
A Axis oompa loompa Feb 23, 2004 #5 unfortunatly at this moment i don't have a bass so that is a octave pedaled guitar. My next purpose is a popper stopper. the one on the picture page is not what i was using.. im using one of those thick pop screens for mics w/ a pencil in the middle of it. I'll try some percussion out on this. thanks for the idea.
unfortunatly at this moment i don't have a bass so that is a octave pedaled guitar. My next purpose is a popper stopper. the one on the picture page is not what i was using.. im using one of those thick pop screens for mics w/ a pencil in the middle of it. I'll try some percussion out on this. thanks for the idea.
Change of POETS New member Feb 23, 2004 #6 Not necessarily my style of track, but I appreciate music... Lyrically, I like it... good stuff, but you definitely need a popper stopper. Or you need to edit out those p's and b's in your DAW. Overall, a good listen.
Not necessarily my style of track, but I appreciate music... Lyrically, I like it... good stuff, but you definitely need a popper stopper. Or you need to edit out those p's and b's in your DAW. Overall, a good listen.
A Axis oompa loompa Feb 24, 2004 #7 any comments other than the popper stopper on the actual recording/mix?