Finished Song For Review

[Mat1515]

Finished Song For Review

Just Recorded Wrote and Finished this in about 8 hours

 

[jake-owa]

Needs a bass badly.

The song as a whole has no unity or cohesion. Some of the harmonica parts sound like a casio being played by some little kid.

The singing is weird and not really "musical" or "in key" at all.

The end sounds like it caught you off gaurd.

Is this what you honestly consider a "finished song"?

 

[Mat1515]

No Because it only took me 8 hours.

There will be a remake

Thanks for your input

Also there is a bass I guess the level is too low on my Monitors it sounds fine iI guess it's my square room causing the problem

 

[RobertN]

I dont mean to hurt your feeling but, that sounds like you didnt use much effort.