Ujn Hunter
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First time ever posting anything here for critique... it's just something I'd been working on this past week and finally uploaded it last night. It was supposed to be an entry for this past weeks Song Fight!, but I didn't finish it in time due to technical difficulties, so I figured I'd post it here to see if anyone cared to have a listen and post some feedback. I'm not sure what kind of music it is... but I seem to make something different each time I create a new song... Rock? Pop? Thanks for your time.
The Dregs
Ujn and Reve
Pale green waiting rooms lend suffering an edge
Chemicals occlude and overpower my consciousness
I awaken with everything I stole
Vague anxiety... irreconcilably
I will watch it slide down
To the bottom in trepidation
Sentiment, it breaks down
At the bottom we... rest
I've been clawing for a while at shadow selves
I've painted my face to masquerade as someone else
I collapse in to everything I stole
Dread anxiety... shaking violently
I have watched it fall down
To the bottom of... this
The charade, it breaks down
At the bottom we... end
Gear used: Line 6 UX2, $25 Davison P-Bass, Tech 21 Steve Harris Signature, 1992 Peavey Predator, 2018 Vox Starstream, Tascam DR-10X (as a mobile vocal recording rig), $18 Excelvan BM-800 Condenser Mic, Unknown Synth & Unknown Drums, Reaper 5.998, Various VSTs during Mixing.
Ujn and Reve - The Dregs (Down at the Bottom) by Ujn Hunter & Friends | Free Listening on SoundCloud
The Dregs
Ujn and Reve
Pale green waiting rooms lend suffering an edge
Chemicals occlude and overpower my consciousness
I awaken with everything I stole
Vague anxiety... irreconcilably
I will watch it slide down
To the bottom in trepidation
Sentiment, it breaks down
At the bottom we... rest
I've been clawing for a while at shadow selves
I've painted my face to masquerade as someone else
I collapse in to everything I stole
Dread anxiety... shaking violently
I have watched it fall down
To the bottom of... this
The charade, it breaks down
At the bottom we... end
Gear used: Line 6 UX2, $25 Davison P-Bass, Tech 21 Steve Harris Signature, 1992 Peavey Predator, 2018 Vox Starstream, Tascam DR-10X (as a mobile vocal recording rig), $18 Excelvan BM-800 Condenser Mic, Unknown Synth & Unknown Drums, Reaper 5.998, Various VSTs during Mixing.
Ujn and Reve - The Dregs (Down at the Bottom) by Ujn Hunter & Friends | Free Listening on SoundCloud