A critique?

[traciiroxx]

I recorded this song that I wrote a little while ago. I wanted to see what some other people thought of it. Any comments would be appreciated.

Thanks

 

[Nakatira]

I recorded this song that I wrote a little while ago. I wanted to see what some other people thought of it. Any comments would be appreciated.

Thanks

the sound is good, you need to get some more power and a lot more bass in there, bring up the guitars as well.
and the vox could use some effects or something, wich would make it blend more.

But the track is good and the recording sounds good

good luck mate