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    Couple new songs to look at.

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    Stone Pyro - Holocaust Poetry
    Song 1 - Me
    Song 2 - Me

    Comments appreciated .

    All recorded by me song 1 and 2 are played by me.

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    Gets kinda hard to get attention aroud here somtimes.
    How about you show me yours and you check out one of my tunes
    My link is below,check out my new one called Burning

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    Strange works fine for me like 2 seconds. Whatever ill try to fix it. Check this out if it doesnt work anyway. www.audiri.com/davids

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    Listened to your 1st one; a little short...but to the point, good guitar sounds, voice a little thin...but clear. You need some bass in there! Sounds good.

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    There is a bass but its playing the rhythem.

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    Help!!! Someone comment! PLEASE!

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    Hey! Just dropped by... listening to song 1, it's cool, but definitely needs a few things. Drums, for instance... The acoustic guitar - seems like you're getting a lot of pick noise, and not as much tone. Maybe that was intentional... but don't be afraid to pan those things more. Seems like that's all dead center. Electric guitar - the one on the right seems slightly out of tune, but I like the tone decently. The one on the left seems a bit muddy. Your vocal sounds really good, but I'd almost just leave the verb off entirely - this is more of an "in-your-face" song, which lends itself well to having a very dry vocal. I definitely like your voice, though.

    All in all, it's hard to critique fully without drums, but I'd say it sounds pretty good!

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