Cold Inside

[ron-e-g]

Hello. I wrote and recorded this awhile back. Would like to get some feedback.

Thanks,
Ron

SoundClick artist: ron cox - I record by myself and enjoy trying to create something new and fresh each time

 

[chandlerhimself]

It has a nice vibe, but the structure is a bit confusing. It's hard to get into it because it seems to build tension randomly and it doesn't seem to have clear choruses. Also, the voice and drums are really loud compared to the rest of the instruments. The vocals in particular are really sticking out of the track and instead of being "in" the song seem to be sitting on top.

 

[Ben Linus]

cool tune...pretty cool

 

[ron-e-g]

chandlerhimself Thanks for that. That is a great observation. I'll check it out.

Ben Linus Thanks for the listen and comment. Cool is cool!