Cold Hard Soul

[jonlint]

Hi all,

Wrote this song over the weekend and I would appreciate feedback.

Also, I would like feedback on what genre this is - I can't figure that out myself!

Cold Hard Soul by Jonathan Linton 4 | Free Listening on SoundCloud

COLD HARD SOUL
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

Was it a birth defect
Or did you learn
To make your blood run cold
Must be proud of all dislikes that you earn
From your stranglehold

I could never do what you do
And live with myself
Shaping shiftin’, which one’s really you
Don’t loose control
Of that cold hard soul

You can drop the act with me, I know
You’re a soul whore
Each climb leaves enemies below
Careful what you ask for

I could never do what you do
And live with myself
Shaping shiftin’, which one’s really you
Don’t loose control
Of that cold hard soul

SOLO

I could never do what you do
And live with myself
Shaping shiftin’, which one’s really you
Don’t loose control
Of that cold hard soul

Cold hard soul (ad lib to end)

 

[LogicLover]

This Rocks Jon! Lyrics are well written & the tune flows well. sounds real good like all your stuff man!
Its Alternative Rock Genre.......Ray