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    "Close To Midnight": Your Comments and Critiques

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    This is a first mix of a song I composed and sang. I'd like your comments on the mix, the song, or any of its components. Thanks for taking time to listen.

    Moohead

    The link should work now.
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    I have put the song up on my server. See the corrected link above. I'd appreciate your comments about the mix and arrangement. Thanks.

    Moo

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    Wow, what a low voice.

    Nice sound. There is some sibilance (sssss) on the vocals. Its a nice arrangement with the synths. Cool song, reminds me of Johnny Cash.

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    Nice clean recording, everything has its own place. The tambourine might be a little loud. That's about the only suggestion I can make.

    Good job!! Good song!! Your voice reminds me of Chris Rhea.

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    You have made my day! I LOVE Chris Rea!!!!

    The tambourine might be a tad hot. The vocal sibilance is probably due to over compression. I can de-ess this. Thanks guys!

    Keep the ideas coming.

    Moo

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    Does this song need something more in the bridge instrumentally?

    Moo

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