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    check out my song.. "run"

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    its called Run, self recorded, unmastered.. Umm, just a couple 18/19 year old kids doing what they can with our meager equipment

    tell me what you think.. i dont really want comments on minor fuck ups in the songs performance(cus im sure if you look they exist).. http://hazzlemp3s.iuma.com

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    heres a faster place to download the song

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/hazzlemusic.htm

    thanks.

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    I checked it out.

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    Thumbs down

    not very good, really.

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    My speakers here aren't very good so I can't comment on the mix.

    Some background vocals would really help round it out a bit I think.

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    Originally posted by colinear
    not very good, really.
    its not 'post so everyone can praise you'... its post so someone can help me. i dont really care if you think the recording is good. i was looking for insight... whatever.

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    The recording ingredients are pretty much there... In the big picture, the instruments are clear, the vocals are understandable and sit in the mix well. The drum mix sounds a bit strange - Spaced pair on the overheads perhaps? Tom panning may be a bit extreme for such a wide overhead image. A bit more volume and "click" definition in the kick would be nice also, but that's a personal preference. No crazy verb or anything...

    On the "really" picky side, I'd love to hear it with a nice crisp (but not ringy) picollo snare...

    Weird click at end... Bass?

    A bit of a Violent Femmes feel with a little more clarity. Nothing really wrong with that.

    John Scrip - www.massivemastering.com

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    Originally posted by Massive Master
    The recording ingredients are pretty much there... In the big picture, the instruments are clear, the vocals are understandable and sit in the mix well. The drum mix sounds a bit strange - Spaced pair on the overheads perhaps? Tom panning may be a bit extreme for such a wide overhead image. A bit more volume and "click" definition in the kick would be nice also, but that's a personal preference. No crazy verb or anything...

    On the "really" picky side, I'd love to hear it with a nice crisp (but not ringy) picollo snare...

    Weird click at end... Bass?

    A bit of a Violent Femmes feel with a little more clarity. Nothing really wrong with that.

    John Scrip - www.massivemastering.com
    Hrmm. I think you may be right about the extreme panning on the Toms. Thanks

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    by the way, what would you suggest panning toms to?

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