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    The challenge: Write the lyric nearly entirely from pick up lines

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    How'd it go?



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    Cool song, dawg. Seems like it should be really funny if it's all pick up lines, but it just doesn't seem cheesy enough I guess. It needs to be way more sleazy LMAO...
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    Quote Originally Posted by FoulPhil View Post
    Cool song, dawg. Seems like it should be really funny if it's all pick up lines, but it just doesn't seem cheesy enough I guess. It needs to be way more sleazy LMAO...
    That's EXACTLY what my wife said. Yet it's a fine edge I tried to walk ... mildly funny w/o being too far over the top ... for I thought it would take the song into novelty land (where I didn't want to go).
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    Yeah I guess that's what I was expecting, for it to be more of a novelty song which would of been fine. You should try it just for kicks LOL. It'll probably be fun :P
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    Yeah, I was expecting worse pickup lines too. They can be sleazy and funny without being too dirty.

    Examples:

    Did it hurt when you fell from Heaven?
    Your father must have been a bank robber because you've stolen my heart.
    Your legs must be tired because you've been running around my mind all day.
    Is that a mirror in your pocket because I could see myself in your pants. (Ok that one's a little dirty.)
    How do you like your eggs in the morning scrambled or... HOLD ON! THAT ONE'S FILTHY!!!

    Otherwise, enunciation was a bit of an issue. I was only half listening, but I couldn't make out half the lyrics.

    Pretty cool song overall though.

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    There was also:

    Great legs! What time do they open?
    You seem to have something on your chest -- wait, they're my eyes.

    I decided to play it relatively safe ...

    The closest I got was one I found funny --

    Please screw me
    if I am wrong,
    but really ...
    haven't we both met before?
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    my face is leaving in five minutes...be on it!



    funny song K
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    Quote Originally Posted by kcearl View Post
    my face is leaving in five minutes...be on it!



    funny song K
    Thanks K! Quirky fit it right.
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