Many thanks again to heatmiser. I've remixed with some changes:
I warmed up the main guitar
Cut some of the bass from the vocals
Added delay to the lead (f/b from a friend)

I'm pretty happy with the changes - the recommendations were well advised!
I still need to line up my drummer though.

Let me know what you think of the remix.
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