In terms of feedback the kick is too loud, the programming is too robotic and you're losing the rhythm slightly at about 21 - 23 seconds and at a couple of other places later. It would sound better without the "drums", frankly - I don't think that pattern sits well with the piece at all - other drum arrangements, slower, would suit it better. Speak to a drummer.
Yeah, kick down (and bass up) would probably be good for this.
The biggest recommendation would be to fix the flubbed notes on the guitar tho. With as minimal a mix as this is, any mistake stickess out like a sore thumb.