AaronChapman
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The recording is pretty dang cooked (some areas on purpose to mask greater imperfections lol) and there's bad fret buzz. Nonetheless, I think the recording has some character. I'm wondering if I should add some chord changes to keep things fresh? Also, how do you all feel about the vocals? Some moments I think the the vocals are strong and then there are some words (like the first "anymore) that are a little thin. I was trying to get a balance of gentless and raspiness from the tune. You know, a little whiny...a little lonesome...and a little drunk. Not sure if it works. Is this a noticeable distraction or do you feel the contrast adds the desired emotion? I was thinking of getting my sister (wayyy better singer than I) to do the backup vocals at around the 2:10 mark. I was thinking adding a female voice would provide an interesting dynamic to the song. Watcha think?
Broken Love (From Demo Album "Bartender My Glass Is Half Empty) by Aaron Chap | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Lyrics: (varries a little)
Girl, I want to love you.
I try to trust yeah,
But you crazy about your broken love.
I love how you're gentle.
I love how you're kind.
But, nobody's fooled by that anger inside.
Curse it like it's over.
I don't see the closure.
I hardly even know yeah.
But, I'll be by your side.
String me all around.
Find some common ground.
Still, don't know if I belong.
I have no mind.
Anymore,
Maybe we're similar?
Maybe we got that together?
Got that together?
Anymore...
Broken Love (From Demo Album "Bartender My Glass Is Half Empty) by Aaron Chap | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Lyrics: (varries a little)
Girl, I want to love you.
I try to trust yeah,
But you crazy about your broken love.
I love how you're gentle.
I love how you're kind.
But, nobody's fooled by that anger inside.
Curse it like it's over.
I don't see the closure.
I hardly even know yeah.
But, I'll be by your side.
String me all around.
Find some common ground.
Still, don't know if I belong.
I have no mind.
Anymore,
Maybe we're similar?
Maybe we got that together?
Got that together?
Anymore...
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