Hey man... heard this a few days back; sorry I didn't catch it before... well
the first version, maybe...
Great full production... would like that hiss during v1 to "go away" somehow...
thinkin that's in the drum tracks somewhere....
... great overdubs...
like audiowaves washing over... cool voc harmonies.
The production seems to need some crispness... drum tracks , again... a really
snappy snare would help... some crisper tom-toms... cymbals aren't bad. There's
just a lot of mid-content here... what w/all the guit overdubs... A crackle on
the clean gt at 3:30 (clip)...
Very mellow vibe... good tune. Would like to hear this thing brushed up and
purty... maybe you've hit the wall w/resp. to what your current set up can
do for you? But it's a cool song.
C