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    Hi, if anyone can listen and give his comment? Thank you

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    I thought it was really cool. VERY Pink Floyd style especially with all the sound effects. Good vocals and really cool bass sound. Good job
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    Thank you very much Bruthish.

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    I thought the sounds were all good. I liked the guitar sounds. Vocals were all very clear - but I thought the first vocal was a bit siblant and slightly harsh sounding. The second vocal gets covered up by the instruments - not sure if it's intentional. But words here and there get lost in the mix.

    I thought the tune took a long time to get going. I think there is just a little too much playing around before things get going.

    I think you could nudge the bass up a little bit.

    I assume the drums were canned. But they didn't sound too bad to me.

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    I had a lot of problems to get vocals to somehow sit in the mix, i was probably recording it to close to mic. Do you think this caused the siblant and harshes? In second verse i'll try bring up these lost vords with automation since i already compressed it a lot.
    About bass, a volume up or brightess? How can i tread drums to get rid canned?
    Thank you for your comment.

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    no mix comments to make,i just sat back,listened and enjoyed

    but yeah very floyd

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    Thats very nice to hear, thank you. So you sat back and listen? But mama told me to make dance songs...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Simspajt View Post
    But mama told me to make dance songs...
    you is a bad,bad boy ...



    thank fook your not a "produca"

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    I still don`t like vocals. I recorded another one but was even worst. Audix bc2i2 condensator mic. I can`t improve sibliance and harash even with some eq, de esser...
    Should i borrow another mic?

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    You should be able to get rid of some of the sibilance with some EQ/de-esser - the lead vocal sounds very high-passed, which doesn't help it. As TripleM points out the 2nd vocal is buried.
    Canned drums - MIDI-software. Do some editing to change the snare hits' volume and timing. It doesn't sound bad, just needs some 'humanizing.

    I agree that the song takes a little too long to get going and everything after 4 minutes is just filler - as if it was a song from a soundtrack, like PF's The Wall.
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