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    An almost finished song....

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    I started recording this on Thursday, finished it on Friday..but i know it's not over considering it usually takes me months to finish re-doing a song...I figure I might as well get advice on this the sooner the better....There are still a few things that I know need to be better...A few vocal lines and lyrics that just don't sit right....Anyway, as usual, the comments I get here always make my songs better, so whatever suggestions you have will be appreciated. Thanx in advance.

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    Rami, which song on your site is it?

    Tim

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    HAHA! I didn't post a link did I??? Gad damn tequila....gimme a second.

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    Ok...I'm an idiot..I think THIS will work. Sorry.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RAMI
    HAHA! I didn't post a link did I??? Gad damn tequila....gimme a second.

    I'm downloading okay?

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    i'd speed it up, rami considerably!

    what about the guitar/bass/vox arrangement on the chorus, they seem to accentuate the same beat.... and here's a shocker: i'd play A/D/Bm/E/A/D/A/E.... he he he!.... i sometimes wonder how i dare... LOL



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    Good song RAMI!!!! The recording issues I will pass on, I know nothing!!

    But I really do like your song. Your are very talented. Oh, I have told you this before. I do repeat myself a lot when excited!!

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    Don't you dare write the chords for MY song!!! LOL!!!

    I tried your chord progression with the chorus, I'd have to change the melody too much. The thing that worries me the most about this song are the verses. I say "Remeber how it was" a million times. I don't know if it's just too repetitve to me, or if repetition is a good thing. I'm not sure if that's good repetition or bad repetition.

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    Ah True...we posted at the same time....Thanx alot. I really appreciate what you tell me about my music, you make me feel good about myself. I am honestly insecure about my songs when I first "put them out there" becasue I work alone and have nobody else's input when I'm recording. So, people here are really the first ones to hear a new song of mine, and until that point, I have no idea if I wrote something good or totally missed the mark. Thanx.

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    RAMI, good tune. I'm on dial up for 2 weeks, and listening on the laptop, but when i get enough songs downladed, I will burn them to disc, and get a better listen on the stereo. Until then, it sounded good on crappy laptop speakers...
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